Wednesday, 15 August 2012

Continuing stories about Mt Tongariro

Nicholas. Yesterday the volcano made smoke and it was white. When you looked back there was ice on the top and at the bottom. The black was rocks and there was ash on the road. There was a truck cleaning the ash off the road.

Joshua. Yesterday there was a volcano eruption. There was ash on the roads. Some of the roads got blocked because it was dangerous. It was dangerous to go outside. The ash was on the road. Some police had to go on the mountain to see if anyone was hurt.

Fletcher. Last night a volcano erupted. I smelt the smoke. It was stinky, very very stinky. I heard from the news but I did not smell it. My Dad smelt it. Last night I couldn't have my window open because dad thought I smelt it. Some experts found out that the volcano had erupted.

Thomas. Last night the volcano erupted. I could see smoke. The volcano was throwing rocks and I know why the volcano erupted because of all of the earthquakes. The volcano smells like rotten eggs and there is lots of ash.

matthew. Yesterday there was a volcano eruption at Mt Tongariro. There was rocks and smoke. It became blurry. It was hrad to see. It was covered everywhere. It was scary because it was smoke and there was ash.

George. Yesterday a volcano erupted lots of smoke and rocks. There was ash on the road. A truck had a plough to push the ash off the road so the cars can go through. A horse got some ash on it. Someone brushed it off. The ash covered the hills.

Ben. Yesterday the volcano erupted and it smelled like rotten eggs. It threw rocks and hot steam came out. The ash went onto the road.

Katelyn. Last night the volcano was smoking and in the inside of the volcano there was hot lava and inside it was hot and it was erupting to and it was smelly and it is sticky too and all the rocks fall down the hills.

Charlotte. Yesterday a volcano erupted. I could smell it. It smelt like rotten eggs. It was dark on the news. It was really interesting. It was smoky and the good scientists are investigating to see if another volcano will explode. It is big.

Ambrosio. The volcano eruption exploded. It threw ash out. The explosion was on the road. It was all over the whole road. It was smelly like rotten eggs. It was amazing. It was awesome because it shot out all the smoke.

4 comments:

  1. Wow Teamwork 10! What excellent authors you are!

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  2. wow Room 10 what amazing stories about Mt Ruapehu erupting. I love the way you have worked hard to add detail to your writing by using adjectives and the best verbs. You could all be news reporters. Ka pai!

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  3. Well done Charlotte - we loved reading your story about the eruption. It certainly did smell like rotten eggs didn't it! Keep working hard, love Mummy, Daddy, Lachie and Sam.

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  4. Well done Room Ten. Great description in your writing. We liked how you described Mount Tongariro. By Room 4

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